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I Dream sketch by *Baka-art:iconBaka-art:

Categories Manga/Anime > Traditional Media > Drawings

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Artist's Comments

submitting a pencil drawing after some while ~ messy x.x

I need to finish coloring this til tommorow >.< gah - before i leave

OC Hime - you saw her in my newest and removed picture - with different hairstyle and glasses yet to be Cged ^^"

Drawing food is nice, makes you hungry

2B pencil

Scraps soon, just something to fill my dead gallery x.x

Critiques


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=Atramina Jun 27, 2009, 3:40:06 PM
Hi hi! It's time for critique!
First of all I'd like to resalt the cuteness in this piece. You achieved, as always, a delicious appearance that inspires tender feelings to the audience. Congratulations!
Now let's go to the thing! These are my points:

:bulletgreen: Hair is amazingly drawn. The locks are beautifully separated, giving the character a gorgeous style.

:bulletred: I have no complains about the torso, but pay attention to the left arm (the one in the front), it's a lil bit advanced. I'd put it a lil bit back just in the upper part, maybe bending it in the elbow.

:bulletgreen: Beautiful sandals! Love the design, just gorgeous! The ribbons are so beautiful, and they fit with the tender character who's wearing the shoes.

:bulletred: Just as you did with laces on the sandals, don't forget to add folds on the lace on her hair :)

:bulletgreen:LOVELY background! I'm just wishing to see how you colour it!

:bulletred: Beware with the dress! Where it ends, in the legs, you made the end too straight, don't forget her thighs are rounded and the dress has to addapt to her body. you did it weel with the sandals' ribbons, so just do it with the border of the dress :)

I think that's all! I really loved how you did it, and I wish you the best for the contest! :) Good luck!
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~Black-Tsundere Jun 27, 2009, 2:48:10 PM
Cuuute, this is lovleydovely :D
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~Merewind Jun 27, 2009, 2:51:35 PM
Give meee foooood. Noooooooow! :O :D

I see you keep going with that star-theme, any reason? :S :P

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*Baka-art Jun 27, 2009, 2:53:33 PM
raining chocolate stars from the sky =D No reason needed to love that ^^ naw it's just Hime's thing

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~Merewind Jun 27, 2009, 2:54:59 PM
Hehe, thats alright. I sure love chocolate, doesnt matter if it comes starshaped or not! :D

I was simply wondering xD

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*dj-lune Jun 27, 2009, 2:56:13 PM
ohh this is so cute!

I love how smooth and neat your lineart looks ; O; I wish my sketches were as clean as yours lol~

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~Yaya-Yuiki Jun 27, 2009, 3:04:02 PM
Wahhh~ That's just too cuteeeeeee D:
Uwah!!


And hey, are calling this messy?
This is cleaner than anything!
Don't make me post one of my sketches. >:U

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=ettz Jun 27, 2009, 3:07:55 PM
Did you copy and paste the 2 top stars
cause they look identical.

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*Baka-art Jun 27, 2009, 3:08:34 PM
yeah, the 3rd one is copied too - the original pencilled ones looked rly ugly >.>

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~Felix-tah-cat1103 Jun 27, 2009, 3:10:56 PM
so cute! This looks absolutely delicious!

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*Chibi-Sen Jun 27, 2009, 3:11:40 PM
Wow, you're drawings never cease to amaze me.
How did you get so good at drawing? I'm so jelous~~ <3
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